Re-writing a better story

Well, I like how this is going so far.

And it looks okay even with the rough patches.

Although I’d be okay with it.

I still want to make some changes.

Not too many or anything.

A few good ones and to cut out a few too.

Trimming the edge of a perfect hedge.

I hope it fits round the corner.

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